How do I punctuate this sentence, commas and semi-colons?

"And Soy; you don't need any items in the group store to join the games, but be sure to follow dress rules; such as removing modern and non-roman hats, like your blue hair."

1 Answer
Apr 8, 2017

And Soy, you don't need any items in the group store to join the games, but be sure to follow dress rules such as removing modern and non-roman hats like your blue hair."

Explanation:

Commas are used where the reader is to be given a short gap in absorbing the meaning of the sentence. Its like a written breather, or take a breath now. If you are wondering if you need a comma at some point in your sentence but are not sure, it is better to leave it out.

Semicolons are used between clauses or segments of a sentence that usually depend on each other or are otherwise related.

Semicolons indicate to the reader that a slightly longer break is needed at this juncture, but not a full stop requiring a period. The semicolon is not required in this sentence. There is more information on semicolon use here:
http://www.wikihow.com/Use-a-Semicolon