Question

Please rewrite into better English: Where does hindu go to worship? hindu go to worship in temple

Answer 1

One suggestion: "Where do Hindus go to worship? Hindus go to temple to worship."

Explanation:

"Where does hindu go to worship? Hindu goes to worship in temple." has a few errors in it.

`"Where" color(red)( " do Hindus ") "go to worship?"`

The red text highlights the first problem. We're talking about people of the Hindu faith and so the word should be plural. Hindu is also a proper noun and so should be capitalized. Lastly, to have subject/verb agreement, we need to change the verb "does" to the plural "do".

We apply these same changes to the second sentence:

`color(red)("Hindus go ")"to ..."`

In the second sentence, the word order is awkward. One way to fix it is to indicate where the people go (i.e. to temple) in order to do the activity (i.e. to worship). And so:

`color(red)("Hindus go ")"to" color(red)(" temple ") "to" color(red)(" worship")."`

There are other ways to phrase this thought and so it's not the only way to do it.