How do I rewrite the following sentence? a. "The fact that Mary, who is now 19, is so constantly nagging me to do my chores, leads me to do things I might not ordinarily do, which among them is avoiding her, like at all times whatsoever."

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Feb 10, 2018

Every sentence can be re-written in infinite ways, depending on the education level and experience of the author.

That being said, I would chop up the sentence in order to avoid the run on sentence. I would rewrite the sentence in the following way:

The fact that 19-year-old Mary is nagging me to do my chores leads me to do things I might not ordinarily do. For example; avoiding her at all times.

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