Is this sentence punctuated correctly? "I, like noted psychologist Jerome Bruner, have found the most success in presenting information, and then leading a discussion to find the answers."
1 Answer
Oct 2, 2017
I'd delete the last comma.
Explanation:
I think there's an extra comma in there. I'd go with:
"I, like noted psychologist Jerome Bruner, have found the most success in presenting information
Let's now make sure this says what is intended. If in being like Jerome Bruner you are both presenting information and leading a discussion, this is a correct statement. However, if Jerome Bruner only presented information and then you've added a discussion afterward, you'd want to use a period to indicate a separate thought:
"I, like noted psychologist Jerome Bruner, have found the most success in presenting information. I then lead a discussion to find the answers."
