Question #f6dcb

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Apr 6, 2017

Dear Freddy,

Yes, we will have to cancel the request on the advice of Mr. Tony, the Registrar Manager. ...(more below)


This is because he has already raised the request for a new telephone line for Jessie.

Sorry for the inconvenience.

1) will - indicates future tense to be performed later as a result of the advice.

2) on the advice of - information received.

3) Mr. Tony, the Registrar Manager - name the person before his title inside a sentence, to avoid brackets.

4) The reason - is not necessary before because.

5) because of - is not used before a noun.

6) by adding for the brackets can be removed.