Question #45c4b
1 Answer
Sep 6, 2017
It is not the best form for good communication.
Explanation:
Other than the specific "rules" of grammar in any language, what is "right" for writing is very flexible.
In this example however, there are both too many long sentences, and one wrong word ('necessary' should be 'necessarily').
There are a number of writing evaluation programs, courses (some free) and blogs by writers that can help you to write better, whatever your purpose or genre.
One is here:
https://www.online-utility.org/english/readability_test_and_improve.jsp
Another is here:
http://www.publicationcoach.com/
