What is one way that the following sentence can be improved with the addition of an adverb?: The folder with the incriminating evidence was lying on the table, while the detectives were searching the apartment.

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Answer 1 · 2018-03-08T13:58:21

Nice question.

The folder with the incriminating evidence was lying on the table while the detectives were desperately searching the apartment.

While is a dependent clause that needs not a COMMA by AP style , Of course, the Oxford style can be.