Could you help me with replacing possessive pronouns and pronouns for a story I wrote?

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I wrote a story. The problem is I have too many pronouns (I, HE) and possessive pronouns (MY, HIS).

How do I replace pronouns with other words without changing the meaning?

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Answer 1 · 2016-05-02T20:59:45

It's either the use of nouns or pronouns in the replacement of nouns. If you don't use either, I don't think there is any way to do that.