While writing a narrative essay can I travel with time?
For example,
" It was yesterday when all this happened. A little toddler from my neighborhood messed up my school assignment. I felt enraged. The next day I pleaded my teacher for some extra time. Now ten years have passed and this memory brings smile at my face when I think about it "?
You can see how I travelled with time thrice while I wrote this paragraph. Is it grammatically correct?
For example,
" It was yesterday when all this happened. A little toddler from my neighborhood messed up my school assignment. I felt enraged. The next day I pleaded my teacher for some extra time. Now ten years have passed and this memory brings smile at my face when I think about it "?
You can see how I travelled with time thrice while I wrote this paragraph. Is it grammatically correct?
1 Answer
Aug 22, 2017
"A simile", after have passed, you should add a comma
Explanation:
" It was yesterday when all this happened. A little toddler from my neighborhood messed up my school assignment. I felt enraged. The next day I pleaded my teacher for some extra time. Now ten years have passed , and this memory brings a smile to my face when I think about it "?
